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README

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     stretcher with partial phase locking to peak frequencies and phase
     resynchronisation at noisy transients.  It is suitable for most
     musical uses with its default settings, and has a range of options
-    to adjust if desired.
+    for fine tuning.
 
  ** Real-time capable
 
-    In addition to the offline mode (where all audio data is available
-    beforehand), Rubber Band supports a true real-time, lock-free
-    streaming mode, in which the time and pitch scaling ratios may be
-    dynamically adjusted during use.
+    In addition to the offline mode (for use in situations where all
+    audio data is available beforehand), Rubber Band supports a true
+    real-time, lock-free streaming mode, in which the time and pitch
+    scaling ratios may be dynamically adjusted during use.
 
  ** Sample-accurate duration adjustment
 
@@ -58,21 +58,17 @@ Attractive features:
 
  ** Free Software
 
-    Rubber Band is Free Software, published under the GNU General
-    Public License.  This means you may use, modify and redistribute
-    it free of charge under certain conditions, such as that you
-    offer the same conditions when re-distributing Rubber Band or
-    works based on it.  Please read the file COPYING for details.
-    Commercial terms are also available for proprietary applications.
+    Rubber Band is Free Software published under the GNU General
+    Public License.
 
 Limitations:
 
- ** Not very fast
+ ** Not especially fast
 
     The algorithm used by Rubber Band is fundamentally not all that
     quick, and Rubber Band is not the fastest implementation on earth.
 
- ** Not exactly state of the art
+ ** Not especially state of the art
 
     Rubber Band employs well known algorithms which work well in many
     situations, but it isn't "cutting edge" in any interesting sense.